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When you abandoned me

I've mourned a silver net in my hair .....
I've cried my face off for you ...
The Sky hollered, the Earth wept,
The Sea itself couldn't contain my rivers of tears,

WHEN YOU ABANDONED ME !!!

The scars ripped open with ruthless words.
The tender soul ignored ....
My eyes cried tears of blood,
My rage is like Fire & Stone !

WHEN YOU ABANDONED ME !!!

I crie from the highest cliff,
Through the deepest valley
Down the darkest cave
ALL living beings hear my lament !

WHEN YOU ABANDONED ME !!!

NEVER shall you be loved again , as I loved you !
NEVER see another fruit from your loins
NEVER again will your heart melt
ALWAYS shall you remember me .....



This curse is yours to have & hold
..... When you abandoned me ......
©2004-2009 ~Avalokita
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Author's Comments

About an ancient theme ... abandonment.
Which struck me down to a point I feel like I can't come back from anymore.

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:iconthetimidwildone:
WOW... how beautifully original and provocative!!! Definatly a favourite!
:iconavalokita:
Thank you so much for commenting on this piece ... :floating
It means so much to me ... (this work).
As you perhaps could imagine .... these were very therapeutic words I've wrote there.
Those few poems AND the My Love series did help me a lot to work out the feelings of grief I had.
So .... art is therapeutic ! :deviation:
Take care ... Ellen

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:iconavalokita:
I've put my reply on the wrong place ... I hope you've read it ....:kiss:

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"People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid."
- Kierkegaard
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February 7, 2004
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