When you abandoned me
I've mourned a silver net in my hair .....
I've cried my face off for you ...
The Sky hollered, the Earth wept,
The Sea itself couldn't contain my rivers of tears,
WHEN YOU ABANDONED ME !!!
The scars ripped open with ruthless words.
The tender soul ignored ....
My eyes cried tears of blood,
My rage is like Fire & Stone !
WHEN YOU ABANDONED ME !!!
I crie from the highest cliff,
Through the deepest valley
Down the darkest cave
ALL living beings hear my lament !
WHEN YOU ABANDONED ME !!!
NEVER shall you be loved again , as I loved you !
NEVER see another fruit from your loins
NEVER again will your heart melt
ALWAYS shall you remember me .....
This curse is yours to have & hold
..... When you abandoned me ......
©2004-2009 ~Avalokita
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About an ancient theme ... abandonment.
Which struck me down to a point I feel like I can't come back from anymore.
Which struck me down to a point I feel like I can't come back from anymore.
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It means so much to me ... (this work).
As you perhaps could imagine .... these were very therapeutic words I've wrote there.
Those few poems AND the My Love series did help me a lot to work out the feelings of grief I had.
So .... art is therapeutic !
Take care ... Ellen
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